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Get Into College—Writing the College Essay
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![]() Financial Aid
- Need-based vs need-blind
- What you want is not always what you get
- Building your aid package
- Where to learn more
What Happens Next?
- Awaiting admissions decision
- Waitlisted
- Time to reflect
Transfers
Taking a Year Off
International Students
List of all USA Colleges
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Don't be pretentious
First of all, take a look at some of these essay titles:
The problem with these topics? Too pretentious.
Tell about yourself!
They don’t tell much, if anything at all, about the applicant. The main purpose of the essay is to tell the admissions officers about yourself – your passions, your priorities and your life.
Express yourself clearly
When you write the essay, you want to be sure that you are able to express yourself clearly. What is it about yourself that you want to talk about? Let the reader in to your world. A good essay will tell a lot about an applicant. When admissions officers read your essay, they are trying to get to know you as a person, not as a set of numbers.
Show, don't tell
Show, don’t tell. Good writers always show their skills. For example, don’t just say, “I never give up.” Talk instead about how you were not picked for the school debate in 9th grade, how you continue to improve your speaking skills and finally was chosen to represent your school in 10th grade.
Say "I"
Write in the first person perspective. Very acceptance essays are written in the third person. Use your own experiences. It’s more interesting when adcoms are able to read about your world the way you see it. The best essays are personal and come from the heart of the applicant. The better adcoms know you as a person, the more likely you will be admitted.
Don't pretend
It doesn’t matter what you write about. It’s the way you write it. The dullest topic can be turned into a winning essay if you do it right. Topics like “How ____ Changed My Life” are seldom good essays; only because as teenagers, you are not likely to have faced such a life-changing moment in your life. The ADCOMS know that, and you only come across as pretentious.
Some questions are fairly typical. “Write about the activity that has the most meaning to you” appears almost every year. Essays like this are meant for you to discuss your passions. They want to know what you love doing.
After you write your essay, ALWAYS remember to proofread it. Unlike the essay in the SAT where you only have 25 minutes to write a decent piece, the application essay provides you plenty of time to spellcheck and edit. There’s no reason for you not to proofread your essays before submitting them.
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